floweyflower's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Scout just talkin]

"so.I.was.right.there.and.do.you.wanna.know.what.happened.
THIS.DAMN.PYRO.RAN.AT.ME.so.I.shot.his.skull.clean.off."
I.like.the.pose.and.it.is.easy.to.see.scout.talking.like.this

ShiboAtisuto responds:

I tried working his character into a pose thats believable for him.

[chibi leon]

looks.good.and.the.only.bad.thing.about.it
is.that.some.of.the.details.on.the.arn.are.thinner.than.
the.rest.of.the.image

sushiisiu responds:

Its on purpose lol its lineweight

[I called it "haha lmao"]

the.only.criticism.I.can.give.is.that.her.lines.near.her.neck.need.to.
be.more.alligned.with.each.other
(I.dont.know.what.they.are.called.;(.)

Sutikku-Zu responds:

I think it's called the clavice or something? And yeah I did correct that in a version I made for a friend I'll update this piece, thanks for the reminder

[Rumia apocalypse]

dang.from.what.ive.seen.you.made.a.lot.of.progress.since.these.picture.
please.tell.me.your.secret.;0 ;

Sutikku-Zu responds:

The secret for me was to stop being lazy, but if you want actual advice uh practice weak areas never avoid them and keep failed drawings as a reminder of what not to do.

[Deku]

I.like.but.work.on.your.eye.spacing.
the.Midoriya.on.the.top.and.second.from.the.lefts.
eyes.look.off

GSMinerva responds:

I think you are talking about comparing the colored Deku and the sketchy in the background which is smiling with the "pink cheeks". Sorry english is not my first language and I don't understand it deeply.
If is that what are you talking about you are right, but if it's not please tell me.

[Daily Toon #070 Ham Picnic]

I.like.it.but.fix.the.leg.on.the.character.on.the.right.because.her.left.leg.looks.shorter.
than.her.right.leg

Boxxi2d responds:

Thank you for your feedback!

[METZA REF]

I.dont.know.if.this.is.by.choice.but.because.of.the.position.she.is.standing.at.her.left.
horn.should.appear.to.be.bigger.than.her.right.one.but.besides.that.very.good.and.its.
way.better.than.anything.I.can.do
(it.cut.the.text.off);-;

Jack-0-Jack responds:

it was intentional, her right horn is real small

[Madness]

Its.epic.but.the.coloring.on.the.background.isnt.the.best

pls.no.cry,.or.I,cry.;(

sinnykitt responds:

Aww ;(

[ena and moony]

Share.your.feedback.on.this.art.here!
(I.realized.shitposting.isn't.alowed.completely.so.this.section.is.where.I.provide.the.dough.
I.dont.have.anything.to.say.besides.it.looks.nice.but.the.fingers.need.improvement)

taroleche responds:

I'll be sure to improve on that! ^^

[SUCK POOP 2]

I.dont.feel.like.thats.how.typewriters.work
(I.realized.shitposting.isn't.alowed.completely.so.this.section.is.where.I.provide.the.dough.
I.dont.wanna.say.the.thing.about.typewriters.because.I.have.no.clue.about.that.but.
besides.that.the.angle.of.all.the.stuff.on.the.table.feel.different.from.each.other.although
I.dont.really.know.for.sure.if.I.am.right.about.that.and.its.just.a.feeling.that.something.is.
off.and.I.really.like.the.artstyle.its.very.good)

MobsterMelodies responds:

YER TELLIN ME THERES NO RESIDENT SLEEPER ON THA TYPEWRITER. SMH SMH.

Oh no yeah the angle is super dumb lol. I really gotta comprehend perspective more.